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Raddle, Dazzle, and all the frills.
Contributed by
brew
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:02:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Some have ones, who swoon, with gifts
Some, have ones, who give them riches
Others have , the ones who use BIG words
My personal opinion is:
The ONE who can put a smile on your face
The ONE who can make you laugh at anything
Even , if its THE most way OUT thing ever told
Is the one who will always be true, and truer to the heart
So when you find that certain ONE
Let them know.......By telling them , The same WAY out thing, back
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Re: Raddle, Dazzle, and all the frills.
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by crazy on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:15:07 PM AEST
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| i dont really understand this i guess im not paying attention ive read it 3 times and still dont get it |
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Re: Raddle, Dazzle, and all the frills.
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by wizard on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 10:52:24 AM AEST
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hey dayna,
the message is there and i agree.
wiz |
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Re: Raddle, Dazzle, and all the frills.
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 01:00:23 PM AEST
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I get what you're saying, and it's true. Friends come in all forms, but the true ones can be spotted a mile away.
Everyone should have at least one great friend; hopefully you've found yours.
Scorp: ) |
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Re: Raddle, Dazzle, and all the frills.
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by remote on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:17:46 PM AEST
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Hi there sunshine, loved this waaay ouuut peom of yours.
-J |
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Re: Raddle, Dazzle, and all the frills.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 02:19:17 PM AEST
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written with a passion in true brew fashion, and always a gem, 2 read, very lovely brew.
Ben |
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Re: Raddle, Dazzle, and all the frills.
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 03:35:12 PM AEST
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| This is an idea that i've lived out already, but have never seen it put into words. I liked what you said here, it was important for people to read this and understand it. There may be a couple areas where you could work on the pacing of the poem though (i.e. punctuation) , otherwise this is something a lot of people need to read and follow through with. Nice write. |
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Re: Raddle, Dazzle, and all the frills.
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by brew on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 04:50:00 PM AEST
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Thanks all for the critisim, and the SWEET comments........see thats what I mean. Didnt need any BIG words, just honest feelings.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Raddle, Dazzle, and all the frills.
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:01:50 PM AEST
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Hey Dayna I hear ya girl and I totally agree with ya. It's the ones that make ya smile, laugh and say the way out things that are true worthy friends. Very well written by the sweet Brewstar
*hugs*
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Re: Raddle, Dazzle, and all the frills.
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 12:51:58 AM AEST
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Dayna-
This is the most complete, nurturing poem
I've ever read that you've typed-
Your honesty in itself, has left me to ponder
such things...your words here.
(lose the puncuation and I would say captivating)
..your puncuation confuse things-
Marshall your ideas justly, and one line at a time,
and your work becomes jaw-droppingly amazing..
(my opinion)
Gotta love this Dayna-
Billy
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