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missing you
Contributed by
crazy
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 08:24:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Today i was thinking
then i started freaking
because i was missing you.
I couldn't hug or hold you
it made me blue,even thow you
dont have a clue
because i was missing you
I sit here remembering how fun it was
to hang out and kid around
since then i've found
that im missing you
Your so far away fighting a war
for something you adore
I hit the floor crying and screaming
because im missing you.
You are still here,oh so near
half way around the world.
You don't know how much you mean to me
when you come home you will see
I'll give you the biggest hug
you've ever had
I'll be glad
because i won't be missing you
Until then my good friend
we'll sit and wait
I'll try not to cry,hopefully you won't die
I'll be here waiting for you to return
because im missing you
DETICATED TO ALL THE MEN AND WOMEN FIGHTING FOR OUR COUNTRY THANK YOU!
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crazy
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Re: missing you
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by crazy on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:31:17 PM AEST
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| its true i miss you a bunch mike luv ya |
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Re: missing you
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:59:26 AM AEST
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this is a very beatiful dedication write and i am sure your friend would love this. awesome job keep writing
JENNITTUDE |
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Re: missing you
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by Medieval_Enigma on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 06:53:16 PM AEST
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| I love your poem, my husband is iraq and I miss him |
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Re: missing you
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by romance_pyro on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 02:57:16 PM AEST
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| Lol thanks Crazy for your support. And thanks everyone like Crazy here that supports us over here in Iraq. |
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