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Mmm.. I dunno. Maybe ''oops you're dead'' lol
Contributed by
xpixiexdustx
on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:31:11 PM in AEST
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psychoticpoems
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Corpse in the basement
Cold, on the pavement
Maggots feeding
on the flesh that's bleeding
Foul... vomital... vile.
Eyes gouged out with a fingernail file
Teeth pulled out
one.. by ...one
miserable pain, without a doubt
A horrid, horrid end to this life
limbs cut off
with a dull steak knife
Bloodcurdling screams,
Oh, what a bloody scene
It must have been
Tried with all his might, to win
I told you,
I always get the last laugh
Now laughing at death,
on your behalf
I bet your sorry now.
I hope you eternally rot
In hell.
Copyright ©
xpixiexdustx
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2005-10-15 19:31:11]
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Re: Mmm.. I dunno. Maybe ''oops you're dead'' lol
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by crazy on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:35:11 PM AEST
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what an awsomw poem
i loved your descriptions of how you torchered
your exbf its so grusome finallya hard core death poem it totally rocks fantastic write
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Re: Mmm.. I dunno. Maybe ''oops you're dead'' lol
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by guiltycircles on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:57:07 PM AEST
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| nice write, haha great way to release the anger, well done |
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Re: Mmm.. I dunno. Maybe ''oops you're dead'' lol
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by djs on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 08:21:07 PM AEST
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| wow, i would hate to be the next guy who makes you mad. nice poem! |
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Re: Mmm.. I dunno. Maybe ''oops you're dead'' lol
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 08:26:21 PM AEST
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| I would never want to get on your bad side... but this is a great poem. |
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Re: Mmm.. I dunno. Maybe ''oops you're dead'' lol
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by Chilibear on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:55:11 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. Very angry, which just makes it even better. I'd hate to be the person this is to! lol Keep it up.
- Chili |
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