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Angel Astray
Contributed by
djs
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 06:46:15 PM in AEST
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the angel of hope has lost her way,
she sits alone,
crying,
as her radiance fades
there once was a time,
when she was not afraid,
but with each fallen star,
she questions her faith
off in the distance
head in her hands,
lonesome and dejected,
cursing God's plan
how could this happen?
why now? why today?
if i could i would
take away all of her pain
and give her the strength
that she gave to me
the strength and the faith
to always believe
angel of hope,
dust off your wings
because without your smile,
this world is incomplete
please come out isolation,
for it's ok to cry,
but let those whom you've helped,
help you restore your faith in life.
-djs 9/24/05
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Re: Angel Astray
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by crazy on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:38:25 PM AEST
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wow this is such a nice poem tell your friend i hope she is ok for tomorrow is another day
i love you poetry you have great skill
beautiful poem |
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Re: Angel Astray
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by tinamarie on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 08:14:08 AM AEST
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| I LOVE THAT POEM!!!!! |
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Re: Angel Astray
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:16:11 AM AEST
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| Beautifull. |
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Re: Angel Astray
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by ChibiMiroku on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 11:30:39 PM AEST
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| Nicely done; and I hope she gets better soon! |
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