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the cross
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
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Many Many
Years ago
There was
A man that gave his life up his place in heaven for us
He walked, talked, and healed while he was here. The
Leaders got worried
As they always do
When there is something
Stronger then them
So they nailed him to
A cross. They thought
That they had gotten
Rid of the problem
But he is still here
Walking and talking
Through us who
Still remain here
Copyright ©
lil_angel
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2003-01-20 01:40:00]
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Re: the cross
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 02:13:25 AM AEST
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Very good write and oh so true!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: the cross
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by Lone_er on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:37:12 AM AEST
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Simple truth- yet still profound. Nice work .
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Re: the cross
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 01:19:21 PM AEST
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| Very clever & such true meaning behind it,good one! Christina |
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Re: the cross
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by WordPoet on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 03:40:47 PM AEST
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| Amen... |
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Re: the cross
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 07:01:11 PM AEST
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hehehe... it's a cross... until I push the comment button... then it looks weird. I like this, Tis "profound".... hehehe.... my english teacher tried to tell me that the word good is over-used, and so it now is meaningless.... what a dork...
YS |
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Re: the cross
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by Apartment213 on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:52:29 AM AEST
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| although im atheist i think u worded this very well really gets the point out there |
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Re: the cross
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by psyonara on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:15:30 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem. good use of format. no one can get rid of our saviour. thank GOD! Helmut :+> |
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Re: the cross
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 06:24:52 PM AEST
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'Leaders got worried as they always do when there is something stronger then (than) them' is a wonderfully wise phrase, lil angel! Excellent message and excellent work!
May God bless others through your poems.
Bizzy |
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Re: the cross
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by Trisha on
Saturday, 30th August 2003 @ 04:34:05 PM AEST
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i like this and i think everyone has there own
believes |
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Re: the cross
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 10:29:37 PM AEST
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Beautiful job! and may we ever continue in the hope he gives.
Blessings
Andrew
(PS, it doesn't look weird, even on comments!) |
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Re: the cross
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by Cristi on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 07:09:07 PM AEST
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| GREAT POEM! I LOVE IT!! IT IS SOO TRUE! |
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Re: the cross
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by Lionel on
Monday, 23rd February 2004 @ 03:12:34 AM AEST
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Sweet, and to the point.
God Bless. |
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