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Wampyr
Contributed by
SlavicBlackBird
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:52:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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Red silk runs and catches the light,
Her only friend for which she must fight,
And as nights gown falls,
She ventures into the darkness,
A pale spirit wonders the Earth,
Weighing up skill and worth,
For her feasts are few,
And always far apart,
And as the candles go out in the sky,
She ventures home and wonder’s why,
No creature is willing,
To sacrifice it’s juice,
For the hooded stranger,
Who is always in danger,
AS the silk blows away,
she will die that day.
(c) Tammy Thorpe 2005
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SlavicBlackBird
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2005-10-15 15:52:56]
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Re: Wampyr
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:57:41 PM AEST
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ohh... very cool.
I loved the line "And as nights gown falls." |
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Re: Wampyr
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by xPixiexDustx on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 05:58:32 PM AEST
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| Heh has an eerie vibe to it. I like it. Also agree with fuzz.. I like that line too. Good job. =) |
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Re: Wampyr
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 06:33:30 PM AEST
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I love the errie dark undertones to it then it almost slips to the sensual side just my type of write, nicely done!
Michelle |
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