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Kindergarten
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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It’s the first day of school for the kindergarten class
They enter the classroom
Slowly,
Slightly
Gripping their parents hands
All of a sudden they let go
Running on the squeaky clean floors
S
P
A
T
There goes some black pain on the once clean floors
S P L O S H
Someone steps into it
The giggling can be heard from all over
Circle time is called
The children come
Z
O
M
M
I
N
G
From all over
Wiggling on the carpet
Finally the teacher ends the torture session
The classroom erupts in
Crashing
Yelling
And
Spotting
Again
Copyright ©
lil_angel
... [
2003-01-20 01:20:00]
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Re: Kindergarten
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 02:18:10 AM AEST
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This is cute.
I can just see them spilling paint everywhere then stepping in it!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
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Re: Kindergarten
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by Olddarkme on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:37:52 PM AEST
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| Interesting but is it poetry? |
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Re: Kindergarten
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 02:15:34 PM AEST
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Opium I've been sitting here for five minutes trying to decide
Is it poetry?........Yes it is it conveys a picture in words......does it convey anything else.?....yes an atmosphere.......order...chaos.!...does it remind you of anything.?...yes oicking up my grandchildren from school......what do I think of it
IT'S Very GOOD
PS It takes more guts than I've got to write in another language than ones own. |
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