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What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around )

Contributed by Nazmythian on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:46:21 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics





He’d been called away by duty
He’d been gone so very long
She saw him every where she turned
Heard him in every song

The night that he was leavin’
He slowly turned around
He touched her chest, said think of me
And here’s where I’ll be found

And I’ll be beside you
Every step of the way
I’ll be inside you
Baby, don’t be afraid
‘Cuz you know for sure
My Love is pure
And it’s not going to fade
I’ll fight my way back here to find you
Ah, whatever it takes

Those words he had just spoken
With no way he could know
Of the seed that he had planted
Or how deep the roots would grow

They wrote each other letters
And he told her of the sounds
Of the mortars and munitions
Every time he turned around

(She wrote)
I am right there beside you
Every step of the way
And I am there inside you
Baby don’t be afraid
But what she didn’t say
Was the love they made
Had been growing in her every day
Yet I pray that this letter will find you
Somewhere sheltered and safe

He’d be flying in tomorrow
In the middle of the day
She'd be there to greet him
Worried ‘bout what he might say

He was picking up his luggage
When she said turn around
His eyes were staring back at him
His bags fell to the ground

And he stood beside her
Every step of the way
He became a father
And was never afraid
Of what he didn’t know
He would learn, he would grow
He was certain they’d make some mistakes
But he never had to remind her
She could see it in his face

That he’d stand beside her
Every step of the way
And they’d make it together
With whatever it takes







Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2005-10-15 14:46:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:09:05 PM AEST
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This reminds me of a song:

"A lonely sodier
sat at his bedside
writing a letter
with tears in his eyes
Why he was crying
was a mystery to me
until he repeated
these words in his sleep

It's been so long
since I've been gone
and i just had to write
I hope these words
will comfort you
some dark and lonely night

Don't you know my love is real
Can't you see just how I feel
I'm a lonely, a very very lonely
sodier boy"

Your write is very heart stirring like the quote i left above.

Quote from "Lonely Sodier" by Jerry Buttler


Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by remote on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:11:53 PM AEST
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"He touched her chest
...I’ll be inside you
...the seed that he had planted"

What were you thinking? This one just didn't work for me.


Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:41:41 PM AEST
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I loved it. It's very sweet and heartfelt.


Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:49:58 PM AEST
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i loved this.. it was very emotional and i liked the way you had everything layed out..great write


Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 05:27:40 PM AEST
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ah, nazzy......I don't know how you keep coming up with these, (I s'pose anna?),
but they are unfaltering in their ability to evoke such tender and sweet emotion.
This was simply beautiful. I'm beginning to think my comments on your work
are redundant, but there are just so many ways to express....
brilliance.

I love the way you wrote this one. It embraces the heart, scotty. Truly.

~Breezy





Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 06:20:38 PM AEST
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Touched me deeply. I have no words to describe a poetic gem.

Michelle


Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 08:07:46 PM AEST
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this tugged at the heart strings i had tears in my eyes
this is wow i dont know how to put it such true love is showed in this poem its so magical with its story that it tells i LOVED IT
wow =)


Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 05:15:05 PM AEST
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wow.......this is ......touching
I am very very impressed mister, you never fail to surprise me.


Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 08:32:01 AM AEST
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I REALLY like this. It takes tremendous courage to be a parent.
Stitch 8)
(who knows)


Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 01:19:34 PM AEST
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My heart sighs with joy and a new warmth that puts a large smile on my face... This is positively enchanting, and resonating with truth and beauty that it brings tears to my eyes...

The splendors of true love can never really be described... but this.. this, my friend, is an exceptionally divine effort, one that can be related to by many. Parenthood is another gorgeous part of life... You have such a way with words and painting images... lovely write, cheri. Thank so much for sharing with us. May you have many more sporatic and beautiful moments of sudden inspiration, :-). Your melody has been heard... and countless voices are singing back. Hoping all is well with you, Naz. All my love. Forever,

Votre petite fleur,

~*Stephy*~ (Still breathless)


Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:27:12 AM AEST
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very touching write. Hopefully an ending that most of our boys can find.


Re: What Ever It Takes ( Turn Around ) (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:42:14 PM AEST
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Stunning, Scott.

I love how real this is, how it could happen, and does happen and how so many people could relate to it in some way.

Mostly, I love your words, the way you put them together, the story you tell, and how you draw everyone into it with your imagery.

This is a lovely write,
You should be proud of it.

*hugs tons*
Phil xxx




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