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afraid
Contributed by
lanabear
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:48:24 AM in AEST
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For so long its been the extremes of emotions
Deeply in love, or completely heartbroken
Up until this morning
All of a sudden it was emptiness
I try and feel, but no response
I almost want the heartbreak
At least it felt real
I’m scared
What if I never get those feelings back?
They were mine, they were a part of me
They can’t just leave without me telling them to
I want to love him still, even if we aren’t together
Then I had something strong burning inside
Even though it was filled with regret, and sadness
I can’t even sense the smouldering of old ashes
Its like they were never there
I’m afraid to assume that this means a part of me has truly died
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Re: afraid
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:29:18 PM AEST
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Don't worry, a lot of people can relate, one day you'll find that perfect person, and you'll look back, and wonder why you ever doubted you wouldn't. Good luck, great write.
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Re: afraid
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 06:16:37 PM AEST
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| yea i can..i feel the same way right now with my bf..and im sort of confused...i thought i really loved him and now i dont always no, now i just sort of feel emty like there is nothing there at all...im still trying to figure it all out, but great write |
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Re: afraid
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by crazy on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:48:49 PM AEST
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i really can relate
i just got a bf and i had a huge crush on him
he had one on me to
but weve been going out for 4 weeks and i feel like there not much left but theres that lil bit of something and i dont know if it will last
your poem is awsome good write |
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