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The judgement
Contributed by
grode
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:59:50 AM in AEST
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Today I look at my life as a tear rolls down my eye,
A silent rush of all the years swiftly pass me by,
My triumps and defeats quickly come to mind,
But what happened in between will ech the walls of time,
There will be no more years to right all my wrongs,
I sang a couple verses but I couldn't find a song,
My only enemy has always been my mind,
It reminds me of the past I cannot put behind,
Razor sharp regrets begin to rip apart my soul,
As my body edges toward the eternal gapping hole,
I stand before my judgement with only silence to explain,
Because in my heart I know I deserve the endless pain,
The life I lived was longing for perfection,
But I always turned away when I saw my true reflection
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Re: The judgement
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by Archie on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 03:11:10 AM AEST
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This poem warrants a question. What will you do with the truth that you have now?
"Is there sorrow to draw you toward repentance or is there sorrow that condemns you in your heart?" It is just a question from someone who has been through both. This is a great write. |
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Re: The judgement
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:36:30 PM AEST
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| Amazing write. |
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Re: The judgement
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by crazy on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:28:01 PM AEST
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| dang! this is such a deep poem its so amazing you are a true poet excelent =) |
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