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Father's Creation
Contributed by
childsFaith46
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Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 12:00:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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From my brother's girlfriend
To the e-mails I send
From the fights, and laugher
To the memories after
From the "Take out the Trash"
To "Cut the Grass"
From the next door Romos
To the answers that no one knows
From the hurricane disasters
To the Greek Masters
From the Powerful Nations
I am my Father's Creation
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childsFaith46
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2005-10-15 00:00:55]
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Re: Father's Creation
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 12:05:11 AM AEST
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Good write. More people should realize that we all are our fathers creation.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Father's Creation
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by Archie on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 12:20:02 AM AEST
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| This is very good. I like the simplicity and truth in your poem. |
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Re: Father's Creation
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by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:41:44 AM AEST
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| i love this |
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