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Last Time
Contributed by
darkscorpio
on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 11:41:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You got me, another ******* sneak attack
I had my guard down, knife plunged into my back
What the h*ll, did I do to deserve this crap?
Treated like dirt, nothing but a stupid sap
And now I really have to know…how long did you think I’d pass
On, taking the shot that I know you deserve
This won’t be the first time I’ve ever written words about
You but this will be the last time I ever write about you.
For 2 years I’ve stood by, as you’ve stepped on me
Tried to play nice, while you tried to destroy me
All along, giving you my kindness
But look at the way, you’ve treated it
And now I really have to know…how long did you think I’d pass
On, taking the shot that I know you deserve…
This won’t be the first time I’ve ever written words about
You but this will be the last time I ever write about you.
For months I’ve passed on the chance, to say these words
But the boiling point has been reached, no restraint…
"I’ve protected you now resenting you…what the **** did I ever expect of you"
Write these words, based on a song…
**** you…
This is the last time
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darkscorpio
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2005-10-14 23:41:27]
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Re: Last Time
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:03:16 AM AEST
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A real thought provoking write filled with alot of anger and resentment. You can definately express yourself very openly and deeply. I hope all is well with u now.
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Re: Last Time
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:14:44 AM AEST
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wow very well expression in anger there.. its good to vent these feelings out on paper..
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