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Traveling Thoughts
Contributed by
AlexanderP
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:10:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Wandering through time
Taking the paths through my rhymes,
to open up my mind.
Wondering what it is I'm trying to do.
Am i trying to improve myself,
or prove myself to you?
Confused and dazed as i slowly walk away,
thinking of our past and all the games we used to play.
Copyright ©
AlexanderP
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2005-10-14 22:10:08]
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Re: Traveling Thoughts
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by remote on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 04:59:34 AM AEST
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| Nice and deep, keep writing. |
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Re: Traveling Thoughts
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by xoXOSaDiEOXox on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:21:48 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem. It's short, snappy and really makes sense to me. Good job!^^ |
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