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Child Abuse
Contributed by
HiddenAngel
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 09:15:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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The abused child
The silent, broken angel
Wings violently rendered by human evil
Hollow eyes
Guarded face
Desperate yearning for love
Bruises hidden by lace
In the depths of a tormented soul
An innocent life is
Extinguished
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HiddenAngel
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2005-10-14 21:15:14]
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Re: Child Abuse
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 09:20:33 PM AEST
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| its been a while since ive read a poem written this way, and what i mean by that is no real transitional words between lines. i did like this though, especially the beginning and last two lines. so very true, tragically. |
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Re: Child Abuse
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 09:37:38 PM AEST
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extinguished is such a hard word as someone who has had one hell of a hard life i brought myself to understand that what i experienced is not normal and from that i learnt to live a better life as long as i am nothing like my family
sorry i survived i hope more people can
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Re: Child Abuse
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by Archie on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:01:40 AM AEST
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| I like the simplistic nature of this poem. It saddens me that abuse happens. |
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Re: Child Abuse
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:04:20 AM AEST
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| a brilliant poem, very heartfelt |
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Re: Child Abuse
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by brew on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:17:04 AM AEST
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Abuse of any is a tragic.........the words, that were simple, and the write, short; told alot.!
Fav....was In the depths of a Tormented Soul.....
Such pain....Such hurt, and Such needed to be let out....
Brew~ |
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