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Amazed

Contributed by crazy on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 08:06:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

i am amazed
of how someone could like me so much
even thow i hate myself a bunch
i am amazed
how he treats me so kind
its hard to find
someone who cares
and treats me fare
i am amazed
of how big his heart is
it feels like bliss
i am amazed
a person with such a hard core look
can just have the hook
the hook to memorize me
i am amazed
his soul has captured my heart
with his arrow and dart
amazed by his spectacular personality
when i cry he is there
running his soft fingers through my hair
saying its ok
tomorrows another day
i am amazed
by how he never disses me
he sets my soul free
i am amazed of our fire
that burns with desire
never touching that line
not wanting to go so far
i amamazed
of our hearts
laying in a bad of black roses
doing funny poses
but never crossing the invisible line
amazed
by our connection
not really showing our true affection
i am amazed
how he puts a daze on me
when his soft hands are around me
i see how much he means to my heart and soul
i am amazed
of this person
who captures my mind
trying to find how he does this
everytime i try i miss
missing thebig picture
noy just a fixture on a wall
but a person
i am amazed
how he can take all the pain
and make it go away
im waiting for the day
to say I LOVE YOU
i am amazed
how a person can make me feel this way
all happy with glee
who canset me free
making everything leave me be
letting my mind wonder
of how to make him stay
I AM SO AMAZED

Copyright © crazy ... [ 2005-10-14 20:06:03]
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Re: Amazed (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 06:43:38 PM AEST
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Dear Crazy,
WELCOME ABOARD YPDC! You're going to love it here. I'm amazed by this beautiful, deep, and strenghtening write of yours. Your boyfriend even amazes me, sounds like someone I'd like to keep if I were you.
Your poetry is wonderful, I feel your feelings as you wrote, and you took my heart to the right place from the very start!
Keep up the good work
Consue

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