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I have fear in me
Contributed by
ZforZachariah
on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:48:52 PM in AEST
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i can feel fear and death in me, as the world turns
i can feel fire and ice in me, as the sun burns
i can feel love and hoplessness in me, as my mind races
i can feel devil overpowering the god in me, as i stare into their faces
i can see into the infinite abyss, as i lay in this finite objectivity
My sweet Zachariah, do you not sense my love?
My serene Zachariah, do you not show any emotion?
My godess Zachariah, do you not know who i am?
it is me, the most holy of the unholy
it is me, the most wicked of the evil
it is me, the most wretched of the poor
it is me, the most hopeless of the beggers
it is me, ZforZachariah!
There will be a time, when our dreams turn into reality
There will be a time, when our rage turns into karma
There will be a time, when our feelings are not shunned
There will be a time, when Zachariah reaches the Infinite Bliss
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ZforZachariah
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Re: I have fear in me
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by crazy on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:55:13 PM AEST
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| this is a fantastic poem and not all poems have to rhyme its what you feel and put down on paper that makes it a good poem and i think its a very good poem even if it is your first submission write more i like it |
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Re: I have fear in me
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by absolutspin on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:33:09 PM AEST
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| Poetry doesn't have to rhyme...it's a really good write...keep it up |
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Re: I have fear in me
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 09:24:11 PM AEST
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| it is always better to do what youre good at, than to do what youre not good at. perhaps the same poem written with a style youre good at, for every writer deserves to give their poems the best they can. i, afterall, didnt use to be a good rhymer either. |
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