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A Snippet of Sarcasm
Contributed by
Jyssvw
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:26:38 PM in AEST
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A snippet of sarcasm
With it, comes the conundrum
To stay or leave-
To have it all or be happy with none
It has been raining for eight days straight now
But I have yet to feel one single drop
The clouds hang lower than the street now
But my head rises above-
And my walking towards you, can not be stopped
The flood parade has ruptured the gates now
But the surge stays stirring outside
A remnant of a torrential stream
As the water rises above the tolerable-
It would seem,
Irresponsible
Lines to let the survivors return
It has become unmentionable
Of what was lit to ignite the initial burn
It has been dark for eight days straight now
The sun has lost its way up
It remains in the shadows of the clouds now
Where it blisters itself, until it blows up
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Re: A Snippet of Sarcasm
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by mindset on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:38:46 PM AEST
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shall we say a good flow and only real people like u know
Good write dood a word to move the ages
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Re: A Snippet of Sarcasm
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:13:56 AM AEST
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You must reside on the east coast..
north east perhaps..lol
It sounds like an ode to New Hampshire..
It's great work as always jyss..
Sincerely,
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Re: A Snippet of Sarcasm
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 03:18:48 AM AEST
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I must admit, this isn't sarcasm as I know it...unless it's directed at yourself. This seems more sad than anything, a story of loss, whether intentional or not. At least that's what I take from this. I must be desperate to read some poetry tonight, I'm visiting your account page...haha.
Scorp: )
( Now that's sarcasm...^^...lol! ) |
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