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Running Away
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:29:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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we scurry around possibilities
like we beat around the bush
afraid to test the waters
for the fear of being hooked
this life has got us running
too fast for our own good
but what's the sense in waiting
and committing to what we should
i yearn for the taste of freedom
my heart is now free of chains
to breathe in this sweet air
makes me think of sweet things again
i'm reminded of a time
when my heart didn't affect my mind
when doing the right thing
wasn't such a battle inside
i've benched myself for this period
i'm out of the game for a while
and when i can stop running
maybe i can breath for a while
Copyright ©
AnastasiaN
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2005-10-14 17:29:25]
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Re: Running Away
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by crazy on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:19:27 PM AEST
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omg i just wrote to a friend saying the same thing about my boyfriend
if my heart would stop getting in the way i could do th right thing wow amazing awsome write |
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Re: Running Away
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by Whisper on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 09:41:14 PM AEST
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perfect that is exactly how i am feeling in words. Bravo Thank you for sharing
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Re: Running Away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:22:30 AM AEST
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this is an awesome write.. very powerful and expressive.. you get your messege across and i can relate to this one alot
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Re: Running Away
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by tears_of_blood on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:18:31 PM AEST
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| good poem makes you think and thats what the job of them is to do made me think good job its really good |
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