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Summon the poet
Contributed by
justice
on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:08:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Write now.
I'm tired!
Write now.
I'm stressed!
Write now.
I feel like such a mess!
Write now.
I'm barely alive!
Write now.
And I don't think I'll survive!
Write now.
Why write now?
Write now.
Write now.
Right now
My heart beats involuntary
Fatigue consumes me
Leave me let me be
So that I can die in peace
For I'm drowning in self defeat
Losing will to breathe
Losing will to feel
Losing will to dream
Losing will to be
Evil surrounds me
Write now!
What is right now?
Write now
because you're tired
Write now
because you're stressed
Write now
because you feel like a mess
Write now
because you're barely alive
Write now
because nothing is right.
write now
because you have the power to make a difference
Write now
even if it's just one sentence.
Write now!
Right now!
Copyright ©
justice
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2005-10-14 17:08:02]
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Re: Summon the poet
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by sararose1950 on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:30:29 PM AEST
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| wow I like this- wish I could write like this-going to save to read when I am lost for words. |
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Re: Summon the poet
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:01:58 PM AEST
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| i read this poem, because of the title, and in the beginning i didnt think i would like this piece at all, because of so much repetition, but you made it work for this poem. that takes talent right there. ive had writers push me over the edge repeating the same beginning of a line three times, and yet this piece didnt do that at all. you certainly summoned your poet. |
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Re: Summon the poet
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:34:10 PM AEST
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| mmm...amazing write......i realy liked it...^_^" |
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