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Tree of Death
Contributed by
djs
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:31:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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i'm making a rope
out of the mistakes i've made
every single one
i weave together and braid
this rope has grown long
as my mistakes are many
i hope it is strong enough
to hold up my body
because i have a plan
it's deeply seeded in my mind
with this rope and my hands
a noose i shall tie
and wrap one end
around this dilapidated tree
my tree of dreams
shall die with me
i'll place the other end
firmly on my neck
tugging a couple times
just to check
it should hold me
lord knows i've made enough mistakes
preparing to jump
my hands start to shake
i wipe away my tears
as i look down
and hope when i jump
i stay off the ground
- djs10/14/05
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Re: Tree of Death
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:39:00 PM AEST
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boy if this was me i would have to jump from the empire state building to make sure i dont hit the ground great imagery here
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Re: Tree of Death
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by lanabear on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:59:40 PM AEST
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| very clever. also very sad, i think sometimes we have to believe that we learn from our mistakes. everyone can relate to this at some point. |
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Re: Tree of Death
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by crazy on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:45:39 PM AEST
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| this is such a sad poem but i can appreciate it for its artistic point of view you write some great poems i love your writings keep it up |
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Re: Tree of Death
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by DamentedSuicide on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:35:02 PM AEST
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| wow wonderful write deep emotion |
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Re: Tree of Death
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 08:41:52 PM AEST
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| I love your use of metaphor...very clever.. |
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Re: Tree of Death
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by LittleMissWonderful on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 11:26:00 PM AEST
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| I hate it when you right about suicide hun. Although I agree that everyone can definitely relate to this, but people should also figure out how to learn from their mistakes. If we all went jumping off trees for every little one we made, there wouldn't be humanity, now would there? |
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