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Be Right Back
Contributed by
Vermilion
on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:28:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Be Right Back
Did I take too long?
Did I come too soon?
Did I come on too strong?
Did you die on the heart of my healing touch and
By the time we have our photographs printed
Into our soul's hands
Everything inside will be tinted
(Can you feel my touch? Do you miss me much?)
Did I hurt you bad?
Did I take all you ever had?
Just like you did to me
Stop kidding around
(Kidding around)
It isn't funny anymore
And I'll be right back
And I'll
I'll be right back
And I'll be (I'll be right)
I'll be right back
Did we lie on purpose?
Or was it all accidental?
Are those scars on your back from me
Oh Holy Jesus I'm so sorry
I thought I took it slow... why didn't I take it slow?
Why don't either of us know?
I just really want to know
I think we died last night (Is it true?)
I think we tried to fight (I tried to fight you?)
The feelings are mixed
Jaded cruci-f*****g-fix
It never was very funny
And you know it isn't funny anymore
And I'll be right back
And I'll
I'll be right back
And I'll be (I'll be right)
I'll be right back
Did I do that to you?
Why did I do that to you?
*****, I just can't ***** choose
Got ***** on my f*****g shoes
And I'll be right back
And I'll
I'll be right back
And I'll be (I'll be right)
I'll be right back
And I'll be right ***** back
Did I do that to you?
Why can't I remember doing that to you?
Are we lying on cue?
Are we tasting the due?
(I can't see)
Are you lying to me?
And I'll be right back
And I'll
I'll be right back
And I'll be (I'll be right, because I'm always right)
I'll be right back
Be right back..
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Vermilion
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2005-10-14 16:28:08]
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Re: Be Right Back
(User Rating: 1 )
by ChristopherFriedrich on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:09:21 PM AEST
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I liked it a lot, except for the following, which didn't seem to belong:
*****, I just can't ***** choose
Got ***** on my f*****g shoes
All in all, it was really good. Nice read. |
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Re: Be Right Back
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by WAE on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:01:45 PM AEST
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Hey Vermillion,
To me sounds like a song, some polishing and it gonna be okay... These **** stuff doesn't make it flow better, so I consider to try something else...
Keep well mate,
Alex |
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Re: Be Right Back
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 19th January 2006 @ 02:45:40 PM AEST
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all in all... I thought this was good. When i read it i thought that this good be a really good song. I would definitly listen to that if it was a song. it was excellant.
christina |
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