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I read
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WAE
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 02:55:49 PM in AEST
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I read and
These aren't simply words but
Someone's unprotected soul,
Which is breaking through the mist
Of time and distance.
I read and
I see one's face and
Feel one's presence.
Perhaps, I even can become
A part of someone's mind and heart.
I read and
I weight up, I measure,
I apply the stranger's message
To myself, removing
My selfish shields
For I want to understand.
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WAE
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Re: I read
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 03:09:42 PM AEST
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i love the meaning of this poem superb write
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Re: I read
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 03:09:43 PM AEST
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i love the meaning of this poem superb write
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Re: I read
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by remote on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:32:02 PM AEST
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Yeah, good one. Last lines are particularly good.
I *weigh up, just one spelling mistake. |
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Re: I read
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:32:11 PM AEST
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Definately.. I love to read.. there is much personality in poetry.. always the underlying message.. every poem to me is a masterpiece.. no matter which style, or what the subject contains..
Keep writing Wae.. you educate well..
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: I read
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by Vermilion on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:39:31 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Brilliant. I applaud you. A great read.. which completely captures the moment where the writer and the reader are one.
One of the better poems I've read on this site, definately.
Happy writing.
Yours,
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Re: I read
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by inoc on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:04:27 PM AEST
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Loved this Wae a powerful write for somene that is searching....
I liked....which is breaking through the mist of time and distance..and the rest of course...
coni |
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Re: I read
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 11:44:30 PM AEST
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I like this very much, for the depth of meaning. A sensitive and perceptive piece, written with skill. I identify, as well.
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Re: I read
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by ebooibo on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:38:22 PM AEST
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| thats really good |
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