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Mr.Shy
Contributed by
InfamousRed
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 12:58:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Nobody knows this Mr. Shy, other then he is that really quiet guy,
is he stupid? is he smart? is he cruel? does he have a heart?
He could never even start, face fully flushed silence replaced his part,
labelled as mean because he never joined a team,
so surprised to see that the worst of society had accepted me,
granted me the status of outsider, saying I was busy to that i was a liar,
fit in with none and accepted all the same,
had so many chances but i was too shy to play the game,
but i knew the rules, never test somebody that has nothing to lose,
I wish could take back every bruise,
but my mind has turned them into scars of different hues,
Now please read the evening news,
Because Mr. Shy guy died in 2005, and he was never really alive.
Copyright ©
InfamousRed
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2005-10-14 12:58:39]
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Re: Mr.Shy
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 01:01:32 PM AEST
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ooh that is sad. it was really good, but sad. *sniffle*
great job.
hUgZ... -----> jennie* |
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Re: Mr.Shy
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 02:46:49 PM AEST
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im sorry im just a little confused dont get me wrong it has a nice flow first paragraph i thought you were talking about someone else then you start stating it is you who is mr shy then at the end he is dead
well i cant get them all
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Re: Mr.Shy
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by ebooibo on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 10:35:08 PM AEST
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| very good |
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Re: Mr.Shy
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by Lollypopxcore on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 07:44:42 PM AEST
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You're a really great writer.
This one was really sad...
but very good.
xoxo |
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