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An open door
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 12:28:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There's not much more to every day
than painting, reading print of grey...
I love candles in the sun!!
I'm not made like anyone!!
There's nothing more to me it's true
than what i am, and what you knew
I love melting in the snow!!
I'm not here but yes you know!!
There's no one in this thunder here
but the terror, and youth i fear
I love handing out my soul!!
i'm afraid to reach my goal!!
There's nothing i wish for anymore
but candle-light, and an open door...
dw
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Re: An open door
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:32:54 PM AEST
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soggy candles in a sun filled sky interesting thought
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Re: An open door
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:20:24 AM AEST
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dw,
It's great-
I love the two line stanzas..
albeit..the whole composition-
Capitalize yourself though..
(I)..and...(I'm)
You're worth it!
B |
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