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My Muse
Contributed by
remote
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:47:21 AM in AEST
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My muse, she is a chime
that heralds the golden sun
on a misty, cold winter's dawn
She is the tranquility
of luminous moon's reflection
on the wet sands of a silver beach
O! she is the melody
of a lullaby sang to hush
the murmurings of a blue soul
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Re: My Muse
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by maestar on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 11:01:55 AM AEST
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VERY NICE.
GOOD WRITE.
STRANGELY BRILIANT ALTHOUGH VERY SHORT. |
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Re: My Muse
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:34:19 AM AEST
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this is very nice got into the jazz of it, silver
beach deffinately a place i wanna get lost
in . . .
Ben |
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Re: My Muse
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by DreamPoetess on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 11:25:22 PM AEST
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| thank you:> I will have to try those words out, and if I spot something I will place it in forum, thank you for this, your poem is very beautiful with the ten:> |
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Re: My Muse
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by Caged Soul on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 11:11:49 AM AEST
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using the ten most beautiful english words does not always garuantee an equally beautiful poem. U managed to create a very nice poem using these words, and I must say that this has to be one of the most emotionally beautiful poems I've read in a while.
One critique though: the poem ends a bit abruptly, and it almost seems unfinished. An extra stanza would have rounded it up nicely.
Much love
Ash~ |
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