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Storm
Contributed by
chickrockerbaby
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 08:42:53 AM in AEST
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Clouds bear their deepest gray.
The brightest flashes,
Drain the light from the day.
Pungent smell of ashes leads the way.
Wind beating back my hair.
Rain stinging my half opened eyes.
Bending back the trees without a care.
Making the outside an unsteady world.
Thunder growls its might roar.
Leaves shiver, turning inside out.
The storm shakes all to its core.
This is no night to be out in Katrina’s wake.
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chickrockerbaby
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2005-10-14 08:42:53]
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Re: Storm
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by midnight_writer on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 10:21:56 AM AEST
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i love storms...and i love this writer...terrific.
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Re: Storm
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by Channing on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 03:59:19 PM AEST
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Good description of a truly devastating storm, great write!
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