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You just can't see
Contributed by
sylviawalters
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Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 03:29:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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You don’t know what made me like this,
You don’t know why I cry.
You don’t know why I cut my wrist,
You don’t know how and you don’t know why.
You can’t see the face behind the mask,
You can’t hear the silent tears.
You can’t see I hate life,
You can’t see any of my fears.
You won’t listen to my silent screams,
You won’t ever care about me.
You won’t ever know about my dreams,
You just won’t ever see.
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sylviawalters
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2005-10-14 03:29:11]
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Re: You just can't see
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:48:20 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
Hang in there friend and get help from your Dr.
I do understand how the inner person can be screamming and no one ever knows it but I also know meds work for me.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: You just can't see
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:31:20 AM AEST
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| Very sad indeed and very well written too! |
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Re: You just can't see
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by jheng on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:11:24 AM AEST
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| what a sad poem. i too tried cutting my wrist when i was under depression. just be brave |
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Re: You just can't see
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:07:06 AM AEST
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| awesome write, well done |
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Re: You just can't see
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by BurriedByMyLies on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:29:18 PM AEST
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| Every single line in your poem is so real, I totally understand you, although you probably dont think anyone does. Anyways, very touching write. |
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Re: You just can't see
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by loner on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 05:18:22 AM AEST
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| sad but well written...i no a girl called sylvia walters and she writes peoms like this but nobody but one of her friends nos she writes them |
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Re: You just can't see
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by ndat on
Friday, 2nd December 2005 @ 06:40:06 AM AEST
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| Be brave lol? just don't be stupid... Cutting your rists is just not very efficiant. If your going to do it go for the jugular or carotid or even the brachial artery... Heres is some anatomy for you http://medicine.ucsd.edu/clinicalmed/veins.jpg . But honestly if I were going to commit suicide I would much rather just inhale CO2 untill I pass out and die. For one it's a lot easier for other people to clean up and it really isn't painfull. |
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Re: You just can't see
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by deathbringer on
Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 04:02:57 AM AEST
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| Very sad.Well written but suicide isn't the answer.It just proves that you're weak.Confront life with all the ***** it can throw at you and don't give up. |
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