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Just Lost
Contributed by
Sae
on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 01:43:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He looked at me
I felt good
He walked near me
I felt warm
He sat next to me
I felt great
He looked at her
I felt unsure
He got up to walk with her
I felt alone
He said he'd be right back
I felt a little better
He grabbed her hand
I fell apart
He hugged her
I gasped for air
He sat with her in the back of the truck
I felt tears in my eyes
He kissed her
I felt so lost
He looked back at me from across the field
I walked away
He's found his love
I guess I lost mine, because it was him.
Copyright ©
Sae
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2005-10-14 01:43:26]
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Re: Just Lost
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:06:21 AM AEST
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Very sad but u did a great job of writing this.
Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
luv, big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Just Lost
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by jheng on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 10:19:22 AM AEST
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| such a heart breaking poem. great write |
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Re: Just Lost
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by djs on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 12:52:48 PM AEST
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| this was great. i am sorry about your heartache, i am sure you will find someone new to help forget the pain. best wishes. |
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