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i deserve to die
Contributed by
keila
on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 12:45:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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i am tired and sick and i really would like to die,
but then again i will not die, not yet.
life needs a change, like everything else
the cuts hurt, but not deep enough
the pain cannot stay, not yet
i am not ready to die, because i am ready to live
and like i say nothing stays the same
my life it sucks and my head it hurts
but nothing stays the same
the pain is not gone but it will not stay
and my life my dear cannot go away
as much as i try nothin stays the same
my heart it hurts my soul it breaks
and nothing stays the same
all the cuts and blood
dosent change a thing
i am not scared to die,
but i dont want to, not yet.
i fight to win,
and win i must
or shall i be stiked down in the dust
the honor code has been broken
and i deserve to die.
deth becomes my friend
not to take a life and spare my death
but i can never win
a long enduring shadow,
brings tears among my breath
Copyright ©
keila
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2005-10-14 00:45:47]
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Re: i deserve to die
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by MetalheadSD on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 01:34:55 AM AEST
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| I like this, good job. |
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Re: i deserve to die
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by reprobate on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 01:37:16 AM AEST
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ah, life at it's finest...screaming for release and yet curious as to what's next.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: i deserve to die
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:47:09 AM AEST
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Life can and will get better. You have to be determined to have control over these emotions. Counseling Services can be a great support. You may have tried them in the past, yet it is finding the right person with whom you feel comfortable with to release the emotions you feel.
Good luck and huge big hugs
A write that reaches out to others.
Honest wonderful write
Love Angelxxx
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Re: i deserve to die
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by crazy on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:57:13 PM AEST
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| wow ive felt like i need to die but my life has gotten better so will yours your poem expresses your feelings so well its depth is amazing keep writing i love it |
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