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Phoniex Rising
Contributed by
StoneAngel
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Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:43:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
mythology
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Fire and ash
Flow through the sky
Like waves brushing against the land
Dipping and swaying
Through the air
Wish I could fly
Through the dying sky
On wings of fire
She descends
a creature of legend
born of fire and ash
come from an unknown world
to help those in need
Copyright ©
StoneAngel
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2005-10-13 22:43:14]
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Re: Phoniex Rising
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by Skinney86 on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:56:23 PM AEST
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| Very good from the stand point of myth... Keep it up! |
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Re: Phoniex Rising
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by emystar on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:35:58 AM AEST
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Very good write.
We all need all the help we can get.
Keep up the good writes, my new friend.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Phoniex Rising
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by SlavicBlackBird on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 06:54:52 PM AEST
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| oh very beautifully done! It embodies the elegance of the Phoniex perfectly |
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Re: Phoniex Rising
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by queenofcamelot on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 03:52:34 AM AEST
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this was briliant i like how you captured the phoenix
bril |
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