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Need
Contributed by
lanabear
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Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:08:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Need
You stood there, as I sat on my bed
You told me you didn’t know why
You didn’t know what was truth and what wasn’t
So you say it was all truth
You contradicting bastard, think for once
Give me an answer..
Give me an answer so that I can move on
This limbo no longer satisfies
It is no longer enough
I need to know
Yet nothing escapes that mouth other than the repulsive words
I think I should leave
You should leave?
Right when for once I may understand?
Do you love me?
Does looking into my eyes and telling me, mean nothing?
You stand there longer
Another despicable word issues forth
“awkward” he says
The blankness of what should be said is so vivid I can almost see it
I feel the old sensation of being lost
My heart says to him, find me
But my mind knows better, it says
Find yourself
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lanabear
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2005-10-13 19:08:58]
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Re: Need
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by smilez101 on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:29:50 PM AEST
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| i like this one a whole lot because you can feel it and relate to it. |
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Re: Need
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 12:30:40 AM AEST
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wow this is very expressive and yeah we all can relate to this at some point in time great job
JENNITTUDE
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