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A Sirens Fatal Song
Contributed by
Minus_Blindfold
on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:29:45 PM in AEST
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When She sings it's over,
And I feel so weak,
Alone in this sea,
So anemic and sweet,
Eyes covered, mind indulged in the way I dreamed,
Blinded by the sweetest sound of deciet,
I seek you...in mind,
I hear you, I must see,
Letting your voice usher me out to sea,
In the distance...a burning passion gleaming in your eyes,
A vivid ray shooting from your eyes into mine,
Your figure shown with clarity by the full moon tonight,
You make the water warm,
So I may drift in,
Feeling so divine as I walk on water again,
Feeling that my heart suspends,
And you always knew we'd make it all the way in.
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Minus_Blindfold
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2005-10-13 18:29:45]
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Re: A Sirens Fatal Song
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by absolutspin on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:49:26 PM AEST
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| this makes me feel fuzzy.. |
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Re: A Sirens Fatal Song
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by Desolated_Denial on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 09:31:52 PM AEST
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I like it dustin! Very nice, and I've read it before ... and I still like it. :P
You finally set up an account.
Kudos my friend |
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Re: A Sirens Fatal Song
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 03:28:14 AM AEST
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I'm very impressed with your writing.
U've got pazaz.
huggs.
emy |
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