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Swear to stay near
Contributed by
Damien
on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've forgotten how long I've waited for you,
but thats all right cause now you are here,
I know this is too much to ask of you,
but could you swear to always stay near.
There were days when I would look into the mirror,
and wonder how long it would take for things to clear,
The you came like a sun to a night,
filling my life with your bright light.
When I saw you standing in that aisle,
feasting my eyes with that sweet sweet smile,
I could'nt stop my heart from skipping a beat,
and that my dear lady is no mean feat.
Copyright ©
Damien
... [
2003-01-19 21:20:00]
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Re: Swear to stay near
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 03:22:44 AM AEST
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Ooo how romantic this one is...i hope she saw this one...welcome to YPDC Damien, thank you for the comment on my poetry as well...i'll look forward to reading more of your poetry as it comes....this is beauitiful....
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Re: Swear to stay near
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by kolbrun on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 07:37:59 AM AEST
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| I have a suspicion i can see where ur coming from... |
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Re: Swear to stay near
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by Chrissie on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 12:43:28 PM AEST
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| A lovely heartfelt poem Damien. Welcome to YPDC...I look forward to reading more of yours. Chrissie |
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Re: Swear to stay near
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 08:04:59 PM AEST
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| all the poems by damien is too good.no words is coming out .it is excellent.hoping to see him as a big poet in near future. i wish him all the best. |
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Re: Swear to stay near
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 02:33:24 PM AEST
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all time favourite of mine. the rest of the poems are good, but this is my fav. :) Ivy.
U have got pretty good fan following. I hope u get more fans for u r poem. |
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