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It's No Use
Contributed by
radstraightedge
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Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 05:36:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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She''s so confused. She''s lost her way. She just wants everyone to simply go away. To leave her to herself and let her make up her own mind, being able to think for herself who knows what she might find. She understands what they mean, but what if things aren''t what they seem? She argues with herself for hours on end, knowing it''s no use because she''s never going to win. Thinking and thinking with nothing yet resolved, makes her wonder if her problems might ever get solved. She frets for no reason, well i suppose there are some, but who actually remembers when the day is said and done. There''s no reason for others to worry about what''s inside, for when the next day comes she''ll have a new reason to run and hide.
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Re: It's No Use
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:56:02 PM AEST
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I know how you feel. A few months back i wrote a song called "Talk to me" Your poem fits perfectly an occassion for me to quote it.
"When heartaches come to me
my soul feels down
my first defense
protect my self from hurt
go run away be by myself
The problem is
that when I run
my heart gets stuck on low
I keep on sinking
in the void
of dissillusionment"
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Re: It's No Use
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by europeanprincess on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 07:48:44 PM AEST
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both poems are good. thanks for sharing too Archie.
radstraightedge you have a good poem here--will there be more to add? just wondering. thanks for the read. |
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