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The Center Of Everything
Contributed by
KaylaNoelHohn
on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 02:46:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Have you ever sat around somewhere and just watched people? Watching the mothers with there kids, The old Couple sitting in front of the coffee shop, thinking it will be a nice spot to relax, when in reality, it's the busyest place around.
Sitting in the middle of the food court, it seems like i dont exist, its as if im frozen in time and everything is spinning around me, moving at a pace i cant seem to keep up with... Im the Center of Everthing. The Center Of Everything on the outside, but yet i am stuck on the inside. Its rather comforting, Being alone on the inside that is. I dont have to speak or touch anyone. I only watch. Watch the people around me, Wonder about what there thinking, do they know im watching them? Are they watching me, Watching people? Do they see me as i see them? Spinning?
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KaylaNoelHohn
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2005-10-13 14:46:25]
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Re: The Center Of Everything
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 02:51:26 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this very well and in the opposite way to.I like interaction. Thanks for writing a good hearted poem. |
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Re: The Center Of Everything
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by xPixiexDustx on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 02:53:26 PM AEST
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| I do that all the time ..and often wonder the same things. I like this.. good job. =) |
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Re: The Center Of Everything
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 04:13:39 PM AEST
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| i have deffinantly felt like this..many times..you expressed it so well...this was brilliant... |
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Re: The Center Of Everything
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 03:53:11 PM AEST
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It's ironic that you wrote about this.I wrote a poem about people watching while I was on holiday last month, which I will post soon.
How spooky life is sometimes
Steve |
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