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Meet me on a falling star
Contributed by
In_a_while
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Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:20:55 PM in AEST
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I spend my time black in the sun
no one's with me on the plain
Keep my guns deep in the ground
I can't tell what's in my name
Push me through revolving doors
meet me on my falling star
Keep my car straight on the road
I can't my feel through my heart's tar
Spill the hourglass
mention grave
Save the hour past
i can't crave
Shed your wool and bare sharp teeth
i know i've met my match in Hell
Further from the sun i rot
but that's just not for me to tell
I have no bones for love to pick
i burned up sometime long before
The attic creaks and here i sit
writing words that mean no more.
dw
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Re: Meet me on a falling star
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by shelby on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 04:32:24 PM AEST
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each word paints a picture of emotional beauty
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Re: Meet me on a falling star
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 12:56:41 AM AEST
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It's a testament dw...
a bit forced with the rhyme..
but a testament..
My say is, feel and go..
loved it jus' the same...
Billy
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