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I Love Sad Island Sand
Contributed by
grey_matters
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Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:11:12 PM in AEST
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She's so dark, and deep, and dead to me,
She's the hole, that grows, to take me home,
Let me in to enter, the glass half empty, almost completely,
Everything one thing in it's right place...
The grass is greener,
Over here,
You're the fog that,
Keeps it clear,
Re-inventing,
What we knew,
Token line,
Tell the truth,
You're the reason,
I feel pain,
And it feels so good to,
Feel again...
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2005-10-13 12:11:12]
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Re: I Love Sad Island Sand
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 01:11:55 PM AEST
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| wow.....i don't know what else to say to this...except wow...the title reeled me into an amazing sea of all sorts of feelings and thoughts about this.....just....wow....you have an unmistakable talent...brilliant.. |
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Re: I Love Sad Island Sand
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 03:03:21 PM AEST
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It's pretty good! I thought the first half was almost assuredly original but i can't say the same for the last half. I'm sure a Nirvana song held the very same lyrics.... so brilliance i think, will have to wait until you find originality.
I like the first half though very much
keep it up. |
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