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Where do I start. . .?
Contributed by
JenJen
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Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:31:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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How do I start,
To start to explain these feeling
Where do I start,
To cry?
How do I start,
To explain how sorry I really am?
Where do I start,
To talk my true feelings?
How did I finished
Such a good friendship?
Why did I say
Those hateful words?
Where do I start
To write this poem?
Who am I really
Writing this for?
Who is going to care
If I cry all night long?
The only one who would
Is the one that’s not there.
Why are these things,
Going through my head?
Why do I feel
Like my life’s not worth living?
Why can’t anybody hear
That I'm trying to cry out for help
Copyright ©
JenJen
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2005-10-13 11:31:52]
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Re: Where do I start. . .?
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 01:05:52 PM AEST
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| i'm sure writting out your feelings couldn't of made it worse....?? did it? and if so please explain how.... this was a good write and full of emotion... and expressing your emotions like that through words takes amazing talent...but you should never say it made things worse...words have feelings too..;) in the end you will probably feel better that you wrote this.... |
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Re: Where do I start. . .?
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by shaggy2468 on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 09:39:01 AM AEST
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its ok i know how you feel i have gone through the
same things in my past. i went down the wrong road and thought i would never come back. but that was a really good
poem and i dont see why your friend did not like it. if your ever in need of a friend send me a pm. ok? i'll be your friend. |
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Re: Where do I start. . .?
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by shaggy2468 on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 09:39:28 AM AEST
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its ok i know how you feel i have gone through the
same things in my past. i went down the wrong road and thought i would never come back. but that was a really good
poem and i dont see why your friend did not like it. if your ever in need of a friend send me a pm. ok? i'll be your friend. |
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Re: Where do I start. . .?
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by shaggy2468 on
Thursday, 20th October 2005 @ 09:40:24 AM AEST
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| its ok i know how you feel i have gone through the same things in my past. i went down the wrong road and thought i would never come back. but that was a really good poem and i dont see why your friend did not like it. if your ever in need of a friend send me a pm. ok? i'll be your friend. |
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