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done with you
Contributed by
mjh0813
on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 09:44:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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im done with all your lies
they always make me cry
i cant even stand to look you in the eyes
dont try to tell me you never ment to hurt me
dont try to tell me you still love me
im done with you
if i cant look in your eyes
then it must be time for good byes
you dont have to pretend to care
im not gonna cry
its about time i opened my eyes and realize that your the one losing me not me losing you
you'll just have to remember
im done with you
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Re: done with you
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:01:09 AM AEST
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| You wrote this well. It reminds me of a song by Beyonce called "Me Myself and I" I don't know the words well enough to quote yet. |
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Re: done with you
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by strider on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:09:53 PM AEST
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I knew it, I knew you could deliver a fantastic poem that can rank up there with the great writers.
Well done, welcome aboard you have me hooked now.
Felix |
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Re: done with you
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:25:09 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel, nice job! |
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Re: done with you
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by jheng on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 02:53:45 PM AEST
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| great one. i admire you for having the courage to be done with him |
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