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On The Roof
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 09:31:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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On The Roof
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I sat on the roof
To catch my breath
To enjoy the air
To finally rest
It’s the only place
I can not be found
Peaceful and secluded
No one around
What a feeling
To be up so high
That I almost feel
I can touch the sky
No one can harm me
No one can bring me down
Where silence
Is the only sound
Late at night
When it’s time to go
When tiredness
Is starting to show
I’ll leave this place
I’ve come to love
My little haven
Up above
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-10-13 09:31:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: On The Roof
(User Rating: 1 ) by MorningDove on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:54:00 AM AEST (User
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Oh how I do love James Taylor. He is the only one I have ever braved a concert for. His lyrics are for the common everyday person and the music always touches my soul. I just like him as an artist and admire him greatly as a person. You have good taste, my man! lol
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Re: On The Roof
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:03:04 AM AEST (User
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This is very good. It reminds me of sitting up on a great hill looking down over the valleys as the sun rises overhead. |
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Re: On The Roof
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:13:04 AM AEST (User
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Jeff, what a great write...everyone needs that special place to escape, yours sounds very cool. I love James Taylor and now I am humming the tune. Thanks for a good read. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: On The Roof
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 01:19:07 PM AEST (User
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this is beautiful..never heard of james taylor but now i can almost guarentee i'll be searchin for him ...all the good things being said about him and this awsome write inspired by him...gotta hear em....thanks for posting this..;) |
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Re: On The Roof
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:30:46 PM AEST (User
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Heard of hIm just dont know that song..........but most peace to one..........seems that is YOUR peace....we all have one or antoher pecae, or calming.................Thanks for sharing.
Brew~ |
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