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Hope
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:43:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You sought the peace
To calm the fire
That burned in your chest
In a keen anguish
Of a sea of uncertainties
You opened the fence of your heart
And it was not in vain
That you paid the price
When you activated the ember judged ash
That were in your body, forgotten
Causing them to crackle
Burning again
You wept then with joy
In the rage that left from that hurt soul
Tears that vary the evil that consumed you
It is again the hope was reborn
Copyright ©
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-10-13 07:43:14]
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Re: Hope
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 01:32:38 PM AEST
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| I love your use of metaphors....nice. |
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Re: Hope
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by lanabear on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:42:03 PM AEST
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| i like this poem very much, a job well done, you gave me hope. |
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