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Murder murdered in the eyes of god

Contributed by iodinelove on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 03:48:29 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract



'Tis breath that breathes, say sayers said, floundering in the dust and dirt, 'tis blood that bleeds upon opened wounds rotten to thy bone.
How then thou needle's pain stay poison, rust and poison, from said wound and vein, said sayers saying, loves poison said burning in thy breast, no needle's kiss upon thy skin to cleanse said puses dribbled from thy breast, for loves own love dying in thy chest is murder murdered in the eyes of god.
What serum then, saying sayer said, to wash this wound, said puses rent with love and god's said eyes murdered murdering in this dying chest?
No serum stills the rapid beating of thy heart but death, said sayers saying, love in loves own death is love still and loves own breath breathes and bleeds and murders murder in the eyes of god and man alike.

So sayest the sayers said saying, life and love cast face and hate upon the other, calling nigh the angels wings to tear and flutter in this dust and death; comes coupling from thy chest this love and 'tis love alone thy serum taken must exert, 'tis love that mingled pressed lightly to thy skin and fallen soundly into sleep, and 'tis love that shall awaken it.




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Re: Murder murdered in the eyes of god (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 04:12:42 AM AEST
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Wow... I do not own the words to describe my amazement.
Well done...
Take care.
David


Re: Murder murdered in the eyes of god (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 09:47:35 AM AEST
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what he said ^.... no really ... man this really is an amazing write... love it...
-crystal-


Re: Murder murdered in the eyes of god (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 01:25:39 PM AEST
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brilliant...your style of writing is amazing!!! thank you for posting this.


Re: Murder murdered in the eyes of god (User Rating: 1 )
by Loende on Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:23:45 AM AEST
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An amazing piece of work. I especially loved your clever word usage and the way that you were able to draw such a rich picture. Great job, and may you find that love.

Be well,
Loende




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