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what happened to that smile of yours
Contributed by
coolbreeze17
on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:41:50 AM in AEST
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when we first meet it was nothing but happiness
we spent hours together, doing absolutely nothing but smiling
a year went by
and those smiles of yours
where now frowns
tears where always in your eyes
your skin was as white as a ghost
we still spent hours together
doing absolutely nothing but the smiles had faded away
two years now
and those smiles of yours
turned to no emotion at all
your eyes where to blood shot to even cry
and your skin wasnt white anymore,
it was blue, almost as if you where dead
i couldnt wait another year to see what would it be like
i couldnt spend hours together with you anymore,
doing absolutely nothing but smiling,
it was gone and not coming back
all that was left
was my best friend,
who forgot what it was like to smile together
three years now today
and no longer am i smiling either
my eyes are filled with tears
and my face is pale
because here i am
standing over your gravestone
saying what happened to that smile of yours
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Re: what happened to that smile of yours
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:48:25 AM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: what happened to that smile of yours
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 01:09:46 AM AEST
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| This is very sad. I hope this is not a true poem. It was well written and full of lots of emotion. |
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Re: what happened to that smile of yours
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 01:27:48 AM AEST
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This is sad and very heart wrenching. It's written well tho.
Hope u feel all better soon and I'm so sorry for your loss.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: what happened to that smile of yours
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by shattered_glass on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:10:05 AM AEST
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I'm sorry about ur loss
well written it really got through to me thankyou
hannah |
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Re: what happened to that smile of yours
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by jheng on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 03:02:11 PM AEST
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| what a beautiful piece of sad poem. i enjoyed it, though it made me sad |
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