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A Poem Before Work
Contributed by
upomik
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Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:47:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Yesterday was sad
Today is bad
Depression is back
No escaping that
Love is gone
Always wrong
Time for tears
Suicide cheers
I always lose
There's no excuse
No understanding
Comfort's always the same thing
Because I'm alone
No backbone
Death's my song
Been waiting so long
Friends are cool
But real easy to fool
Their perfect lives
Slaughter me with knives
Dreaming's overrated
It can't influence my fate
Everything's unclear
Confirming my hugest fears
Nightmares are real
I'm their nightly meal
Screams are my new piece
A well-deserved Grammy with ease
Reality's here
But I do not fear
Don't fight back what's the use?
I'll just lose
Copyright ©
upomik
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2005-10-12 23:47:10]
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Re: A Poem Before Work
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by absolutspin on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:19:33 AM AEST
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| from the mouth of someone who's still fighting that dark fix...don't give in...and the perfect lives you see in your friends...you might try and look a little closer...cause maybe they are fooling you too |
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Re: A Poem Before Work
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:36:06 AM AEST
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| Thanks for writing this. I can relate to this and I say keep fighting. |
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Re: A Poem Before Work
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 01:07:30 AM AEST
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Hang tuff friend and please if ya need someone to talk to pm me. I've suffered from depression for the past 6 years. I know of all the ups and downs. Keep fighting, you hear me. Don't give in. Always here if ya need someone to talk to.
*heartfelt hugs*
Sue |
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Re: A Poem Before Work
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by jheng on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 03:05:55 PM AEST
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| nice poem. i too sometimes experience depression. but then i have my friends to cheer me up |
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Re: A Poem Before Work
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by djs on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:08:32 PM AEST
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| i feel as if you wrote this for me. i really connected with this poem. each day i wonder why i even bother to get out of bed, yet i do. i am sure there will be a happy ending for me down the road, and there is one waiting for you too. i guess the real test is whether we will get to experience it. don't give up on life yet - the world needs more talented writers like yourself. |
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