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Interrupting of a Dream
Contributed by
mccscratch
on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:39:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In a forest shattered with light,
the soil released a brilliant scent.
Angelic guardians loomed above me
where all my cherished dreams are spent.
But I have been awoken now
from the subtle flash of your tender face.
You have been gone now for sometime
yet I am still trapped in this awful place.
I know how it feels to be alone
with a soul full of sorrow.
How could the sun possibly rise
without you in my life tomorrow?
I still see your name in the clouds,
and your reflection in the lake.
When the sun sets each night in flames,
my longing for you is forever awake.
I want to hold you once again,
and look into your warming eyes.
But that flower that was once you,
slowly withers away and dies.
On this half-mooned morning,
the pain still has not died away.
As dawn begins blooming scarlet,
my life will bleed another day.
Can I keep this pain inside?
Your silent ghost evokes me misery.
Will the guilt just wash away?
Or will you ever come to forgive me..
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mccscratch
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2005-10-12 23:39:05]
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Re: Interrupting of a Dream
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:54:00 AM AEST
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you started out really well, but it kinda fizzled...don't press so hard.
focus!^_^ |
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Re: Interrupting of a Dream
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by emystar on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:20:04 AM AEST
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Great writing. Hope u got back to your dream after writing this awesome poem. It's a bit sad but still great writing.
huggs,
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