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Dreams in Which I'm Dying
Contributed by
TheKid
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Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:35:36 PM in AEST
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Saw my reflection
Covered with scars
Seems rather bizarre
To be afar from perfection
Drowning in my own grief
I wait patiently for the night
Only then can I gain a sense of relief
But, It makes me kind of mad and it makes me kind of sad
“That The dreams in which I''m dying are the best I''ve ever had”
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Re: Dreams in Which I'm Dying
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 10:57:00 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this. I hope that you don't carry out your dream. |
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Re: Dreams in Which I'm Dying
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by candysears on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 10:34:33 AM AEST
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Great write...I hope you here..I still capturing your inner thoughts in ink...
God Bless!
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Re: Dreams in Which I'm Dying
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 12:37:45 PM AEST
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| beautiful |
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Re: Dreams in Which I'm Dying
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by sally-heart-jack on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 04:01:10 PM AEST
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LOVE that song..... those 4 lines are the best, the
"and I find it kinda funny,
I find it kinda sad.
The dreams in which I'm dying
are the best I've ever had."
You did awesome taking that song and making someting original! Hope this is fictitious and you're not feeling too upset.
Good job!
Julia |
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