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Bright Darkness
Contributed by
wesmaun
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Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 07:49:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The flame is growing bigger and bigger. Making air thicker and thicker. Lighting the room until one big gust of wind. Darkness falls and silence begins. Paranoid am I getting images like this. Thinking of burning out the wick. Gone forever in the dark until the day it is replaced. When I will face eternal light. Ever bided by the delight of that dark night.
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wesmaun
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2005-10-12 19:49:40]
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Re: Bright Darkness
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by Unbreakable on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 08:17:30 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this poem, it's bittersweet. Well written, although a bit choppy...Great imagery though. Overall, great work, Keep it up!
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Re: Bright Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 08:30:15 PM AEST
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| not a bad job at all. Nice imagry. |
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Re: Bright Darkness
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:02:30 PM AEST
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short but dark as it should be
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Re: Bright Darkness
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by crazy on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 07:20:50 PM AEST
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| this is short and exciting i loved it |
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Re: Bright Darkness
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by PrincessMew on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 07:29:03 PM AEST
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This one is also awesome, like said before, it has great imagery and protrays the darkness. The title is also good ^^
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