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splender of a season
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 05:44:01 PM in AEST
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first morning light splashes on my face stating what a glorious day it is
fall song from every free bird whistling in the air
the light reflecting from there golden eyes the oh the visions they see
the colour of fall scatter around my feet as the sun warms my soul
this lovely crunching noise floods me full of memories of diving in a red sea
the smiles on faces as i walk the street such joyfelt emontions
children laughing and skipping trying to forget the winter blues
as the furry creatures of nature starting to gather food
air so crisp as the mountains loom the greatness flooding the sky
blocking city lights and the skyscrappers that block the sun from high
all this on one lovely day this beauty i bring to you
wishing you a lovely day i hope you feel good to
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lostrelic
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2005-10-12 17:44:01]
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Re: splender of a season
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by remote on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 10:21:37 PM AEST
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Some spelling and grammar mistakes, I felt good, thank you.
-J |
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Re: splender of a season
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by Minus_Blindfold on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 06:37:39 PM AEST
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| who cares about spelling errors...some people use it as personalization in their poems. I like it! |
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Re: splender of a season
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 06:18:34 PM AEST
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This is magnificent.. very splendid write indeed..
It is that way here now in Oregon.. fall is pretty.. kids playing, squirrels getting the nuts out of trees.. such beauty.
Brilliant write... I loved it..
Raquel Leah :D
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