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Nightmares
Contributed by
justice
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Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 05:32:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Oh deliverer rescue me
From the demons haunting my dreams
Or pray that I rest in peace
For the nightmares seem so real
Oh deliverer save me
The memory haunts
I've been deceived
They're all out to get me
My enemies won't let me be
They've poisoned my dreams
I dare not sleep
There are two ends
No beginning
I'm now in the middle
Where I stand alone
Too close to the edge
Ready and waiting to fall again
My scream filling the atmosphere
Lingering in the air
Can anyone hear me out there?
Dear Dad, I'm drowning in despair
Desperately desiring to be dead
Just to lie motionless
Just to be without contempt
I'm just so sorry for my failed attempts
I sit thinking of how to spend my next breath
Remembering now that I'm just a shell
A ghost to my former self
The host to parasites eating my flesh
I'm so hopeless
OH deliverer
I've gone out too far
I'm afraid to look in the mirror
I've lost my shining star
The current pulls me under
Oh please don't leave
Please find me a curse
For this diseased world
Or formulate a curse
To make the worse, worst.
Copyright ©
justice
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2005-10-12 17:32:07]
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Re: Nightmares
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 07:51:15 PM AEST
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| Nice...I enjoyed reading that. |
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Re: Nightmares
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:19:22 PM AEST
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This kind of makes me think of something I would've written at one point. Clearly some strong feelings pushed this write from your pen. I like the style you wrote this in, with the repetitive words, each with a slightly different twist. Nice job. I hope things improve for you soon...
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Re: Nightmares
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by AshRayne on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 09:38:41 PM AEST
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Striking, beautiful. i would never have thought of it this way. you have a gift, and i hope to see more.
Exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection.
~Ash |
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