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Everything's Meant To Be Broken
Contributed by
Izza
on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 08:42:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sweet Fantasies,
Flawless Desires,
Unlimited Dreams,
Wistful wishes,
Relentless Efforts,
Floating Hopes,
Cruel Vicissitudes,
Playful Fate,
Unattainable Bliss,
Vacant Eyes,
Empty Hands,
Endless Time,
Unseizable Moments,
Enslaved Soul,
Impending Death,
Mortal Me,
Broken Everything!!!!
Copyright ©
Izza
... [
2002-07-24 20:42:23]
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Re: Everything's Meant To Be Broken
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 03:31:24 AM AEST
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that wa some ride you took me on.....pleasure to pain.
Great writing. |
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Re: Everything's Meant To Be Broken
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by doc on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 09:53:41 PM AEST
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| wow!!!!!! wonderfull |
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Re: Everything's Meant To Be Broken
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 12:40:01 AM AEST
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| interesting write i enjoyed the ride |
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Re: Everything's Meant To Be Broken
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by EmSal on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 02:43:49 AM AEST
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Everything in your poem can be broken, and some of it can be fixed and some need a lot of work to be fixed. Great write, thanks for sharing this, looking forward to some more of your poems.
Emma |
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Re: Everything's Meant To Be Broken
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 11:32:42 AM AEST
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This is a powerfully written poem, with Brevity and candour.
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